Some people think it is better for a country's economy for the people to spend money while others believe that it would be better for people to save money. Discuss both views and give your opinion
In recent days, earning huge money has become the main motive of people, but question of how to spend effeciently is the major concern. Acoording to some there are significant benefits for the nation if one spends their salaries while others asserts that people should save some money for their future requirements rather than spending lavishly. In this course of essay, I will discuss both the views with valid reasons before achieving a conclusion.
On the bright side, saving the certain amount of money would really mean a lot at the time of crises because of present trend raise and fall of job market. It means, many of high paid job globally generally sustain for short time so some saving has to be made in advance to deal the future financial demands. One such kind of profession is the flim artist whose earning graph is very fluctuating in thier career. Therefore saving has to made to make ends meet at time of low job oppertunities.
On the other side, if the people country spends money, it will have very postive impacts on the countires enconomy. This is becasue, spending money means transcations of money among the people which in turn helps to create a good market. This will also helps for many start up companies to grow, this could improves the counrty's economy. For a instance, a research of oxford university states that many of present finaciallystrong countries are adopting the different schems for people to buy the products since this is directly related to growth of country's economy. Thus, spending the earing money will greatly help the country growth.
To conclude, although there significant uses for a country if citizen spends money, there should be proper saving has to be made before spending because one cant predict the future money shortages. Therefore saving should always given priority than that of the spending the earnings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97142857143 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49655040413 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561904761905 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1214980173 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.857142857 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383205864447 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12201754551 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890338390253 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226040101766 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078026110139 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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