Crime rate in most countries is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas. Why do you think that is ? what can be done to reduce it ?
In recent days, crime rate has been increasing exponentially and became an alarming issue among the society. By and large people are of opinion that urban areas are more prone to criminal activities than that of the rural regions. I completely agree with the opinion without any second thought and also reasons and some methods to lessen the crime.
The belief among many people that crime rate is higher in well developed areas than that of the under developed areas because of the migration of huge population in cities. It means, urban areas are not only a center for jobs and other advancements but also became materialistic world. Thus, in need for their greed they are forgetting the ethics and doing the unlawful acts. Whereas in the villages this was not the case since people are more concerned to value people than money. Thus, crime has become in more common in urban areas compared to villages.
In order to deal the crime in urban areas, some changes among the society is inevitable. Out which, there should be frequent social gathering irrespective of their background as it can become a good platform to spread love and peace among the society. For instance, a yoga campaign in London with thousands people has made the crime rate to cut by 50 percent. Moreover, people care about society has also observed after the gathering. Thus, this crowd gathering activities will greatly help in making the urban areas better.
To conclude, there are proved statistics that crime has become more common in cities other than towns because residents are becoming more busy to earn money and stared doing any thing for the money. However, there are some kind of group activities will greatly help in the bring down crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, second, so, thus, well, whereas, for instance, kind of, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89795918367 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34012616672 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534013605442 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4664160392 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219256971811 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072508053935 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464764473424 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131484045326 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373346411496 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.