Some people think it is better for a country's economy for the people to spend money while others believe that it would be better for people to save money. Discuss both views and give your opinion
n recent days, earning huge money has become the main motive of people, but the question how to spend efficiently is the major concern. According to some there are significant benefits for the nation if one spends their salaries while others asserts that people should save some money for their future requirements and not spending lavishly. In this course of essay, I will discuss both the views with a valid reasons before achieving any conclusion.
On the bright side, saving certain amount of money would really mean a lot at the time of crises because of present raise and fall of job market. It means, many of high paid job globally sustain for short time so some saving has to be made in advance to deal the future financial demands. One of such profession is film artist whose earning graph is very unpredictable in their career cycle. Therefore saving money has to made to make ends meet at time of job crises.
On the other side, if the people spends more money, it will have very positive impacts on the country's economy. This is because people's spending will generate funds for country to set up more industries which in-turn create a jobs for people. This will also helps for many start-up companies to grow, this could improve the country's economy. For an instance, research of Oxford university states that many of present financially strong countries are adopting different schemes for the people to buy products since this is directly related to country's economy growth. Thus, spending of earning money will greatly help in country growth.
To end up, although there are significant benefits if citizen spends money, there should be proper saving has to be made before spending because one cannot predict the future money shortages. Therefore saving should always given priority than that of the spending the earnings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, therefore, thus, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95145631068 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3754221669 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569579288026 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3942730456 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.285714286 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384755800794 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126985228288 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868162947744 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219548992037 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845234561736 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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