While some believe that prison is the best place for criminals, others think that there are other ways to deal with them.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Although some people are of the opinion that offenders should be sentenced in jails, others believe that they can be dealt with other different ways. I agree with the latter school of thought as it has the potential to control the crime level in a country.
On the one hand, criminals should be asked to perform these acts in order to eventually result in a positive outcome: reduced crime. Firstly, if they were to ask to donate their currency on affected people for their whole life, on whom they committed the crime, these offenders would consider not carrying out this activity as a vast majority of people perform it for money in the first place. Secondly, persistently educating criminals about how crime devastates people’s lives can change their attitude towards doing it again. For instance, about 35% of crime rate has reduced ever since the Indian government accounted for tutoring offenders about life-threatening consequences of offense to innocent people.
On the other hand, imprisonment has been a traditional way to punish a lawbreaker for many year as he would not be able to have as many facilities as he could have at home, and he should carry out plenty of voluntary work at the prison. This entire distinct way of life is what is considered as a method to transform his viewpoint on committing a crime. Nevertheless, there is a chance that this practice would even exacerbate the offense in a country since every person at prisons is more likely to discuss illegal activities, such as technologies and easy applications to do them. Therefore, learning as many tools as they want while imprisoned, many criminals are more likely to continue this action.
In conclusion, even though it is said that incarceration is the best way to penalize a criminal, this way appears to aggravate the crime rate of a country. Instead, asking them to perform certain things may help combat crime.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun year seems to be countable; consider using: 'many years'.
Suggestion: many years
...ditional way to punish a lawbreaker for many year as he would not be able to have as many...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95015576324 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80769537306 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573208722741 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.4697114549 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.416666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8333333333 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169540224648 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559931279094 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542302505658 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107556232162 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536071114047 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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