Most Artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for them to continue with their work. To what extent do you agree?
In the recent days, arts are slowly loosing its importance and artists are facing financial crises. Some opine that government has support to these artists so that there would be proper survival of many great old arts while others completely deny it. I completely support with opinion that there should be some kind of support form administration to help the artists.
To begin with, Arts is most creative job where the person has to use his high imagination to get mastery over the skill but result of his hard work cannot be turn out to be positive always. Some artist of music field always has to strive hard to bring some thing new where as success of it is rated based on people acceptance which is unpredictable. Since most of artists career is highly dynamic, the government has to fund to encourage such an arts as they reflects countries cultural heritages. Therefore, people who choose arts as carrier need to supported by government.
Another point to be considered is that arts has slowly loosing its importance because of people are inclined to other professions. In other words, recent notion about the arts states that it is always a risky job as there is no proper financial support and also no esteemed guide since many of artists are leaving their arts to meet financial needs. For instance, one of the famous stone works art in India has washed away due to government negligence. Thus, many arts has lost its glory in present days since they are not paid off well and also no proper measure from government
To conclude, it is know fact that arts is not properly appreciated in present highly advanced era. However, arts is must needed as it improve creative thinking and also reflects country pride. So, the government has to take proper measure to preserve these arts.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... work cannot be turn out to be positive always. Some artist of music field always has ...
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Suggestion: something
...ield always has to strive hard to bring some thing new where as success of it is rated ba...
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Suggestion: whereas
... to strive hard to bring some thing new where as success of it is rated based on people...
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Suggestion:
...bring some thing new where as success of it is rated based on people acceptance w...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the artists') or simply say ''most artists''.
Suggestion: most of the artists; most artists
...cceptance which is unpredictable. Since most of artists career is highly dynamic, the governmen...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an art' or simply 'arts'?
Suggestion: an art; arts
...overnment has to fund to encourage such an arts as they reflects countries cultural her...
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Suggestion: reflect
... fund to encourage such an arts as they reflects countries cultural heritages. Therefore...
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Suggestion: known
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Message: Did you mean 'have needed' or 'need'?
Suggestion: have needed; need
...hly advanced era. However, arts is must needed as it improve creative thinking and als...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for instance, kind of, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80322580645 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48596685768 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558064516129 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3514146725 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.538461538 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108357909368 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421829408225 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334412153647 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653711973489 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028365814976 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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