Crime rate in most countries is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas. Why do you think that it is? What can be done to reduce the crime rate?
Now as in the past, crime has been a remarkable problem in society. Nowadays, in some nations, crime levels in the city areas are quite high in comparison to the countryside. I strongly believe this problem is the product of the high population numbers and its culture's diversity. In this essay, I will explain the causes of high levels of crime in cities in contrast to the rural side and I will suggest what could be done to reduce these crime numbers.
First of all, the large numbers of population in urban areas make people feel indifferent to the neighbours because it's pretty hard to know everyone in the city when you are walking through hundreds of new faces, that is why folks do not care about each other. Furthermore, thousands of people from other regions are coming to live in urban areas and many of them do not care about locals and they feel free to hurt the city and its people. For instance, research from UTA University found that 80% of the criminals cached in Miami are not originally from that city and similar results were found around the USA. However, rural areas are affected by crime, but the population numbers are not its problem.
On the other hand, the countryside is affected by crime but at lower levels, in fact, because of the low population numbers, people know each other and they care about their neighbours, that link makes a more efficient security system than in cities where the city council needs to look forward thousands of people each second. A clear example is the police presence in rural sides, they are not numerous squads of policemen because surely if a treat or a violent episode occurs in the area, people are going to call them immediately.
In conclusion, urban areas have high rates of crime because of the population's indifference, caused by the plethora of people living in the sector. I believe the government has to invest more in security schemes like surveillance cameras and more robust policemen squads, to mitigate the levels of crime in urban areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, second, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, first of all, in contrast to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76420454545 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47846972488 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514204545455 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.5472162613 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.75 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4166666667 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232826795735 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897464611211 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636464630953 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140604479627 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537314814604 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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