Deforestation as the word itself points towards a big problem and threat to our civilization and life styles. Everyday tress are being cut down for different purposes and motives which is causing troubles not only to our lives but is disturbing our eco system to a threatening extent.
I live in a city which is known as city of flowers, but when i see current situation it is not anymore. Because the asset which my city is known for is being shredded piece by piece with no heart and emotions for the purpose of roads, trails and trucks which are all the major factors of air pollution in our society. Because of which or atmosphere is covered in smog causing many lives due to harmful gases it contains. Whenever a tree is cut down my heart bleeds because not only a tree is taken away from the earth, a home to many birds, shade to many homeless people and food to many starved people is snatched away. Our government is so occupied in making roads and flyovers that they have totally turn a deaf ear towards the main havoc which deforestation is creating. As a result we are getting short of oxygen because trees are being intentionally cut down just to make roads to our workplace better, but what is the use if we are not being able to work efficiently.
In many countries forests are being cut down in order to make factories and living areas, which is causing decrease in the amount of rainfall in that particular areas because forests are the main factors for rain. Moreover, the frequency of floods are also rising because of deforestation. No matter how much advancements you make in technology, if you mess with nature's way, it will come and hit us back real hard.
We should take all the possible steps which are in our capacity in order to make the situation less worse for our future generation. The least we could do is plant as much tress by ourselves as possible. In addition we should ask for readymade trees form the countries who are willing to help us. Further , there is a new way to plant trees which are called seed bomb. They are thrown away in barren places which ultimately starts growing and producing. Therefore, it is about time we take intensive measures to solve this problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...h is known as city of flowers, but when i see current situation it is not anymore...
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Line 3, column 704, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'turned'.
Suggestion: turned
...ads and flyovers that they have totally turn a deaf ear towards the main havoc which...
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Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...because of deforestation. No matter how much advancements you make in technology, if...
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Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: LESS_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less bad', 'less ill'?
Suggestion: less bad; less ill
...capacity in order to make the situation less worse for our future generation. The least we...
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Line 7, column 208, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...much tress by ourselves as possible. In addition we should ask for readymade trees form ...
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Line 7, column 305, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ries who are willing to help us. Further , there is a new way to plant trees which...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 13.1623246493 258% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58542713568 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50077343078 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530150753769 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9912130296 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.352941176 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4117647059 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138938470057 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04221204155 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033778740237 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863141165205 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267327488888 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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