Developments of technology are causing environmental problems. Some people think the solution is that everyone should accept a simpler life, while other believe that technology can solve these problems. Discuss both view and give your opinion
technology is flourished by leaps and bounds and becoming the main reason of distroying our territory. people are divided with their views regarding to cope up with this problem that we should accept a composed living while others opposed it, seems to think that with the help of modern equipments we can disappear this question. I accord that people should be encouraged to live a basic life in countryside.
To embark on, as I agree to the notion, the more be stay away from scientific knowledge the more be can save our Mother nature. Making our existence plain has numerous positive impacts to save it and there will be more employment if we stop using mechniery. Furthermore like our ancestors mostly people will work in fields, growing grains, cereal, wheat, vegetables which will certainly cut the cost of living and give us less expensive life. More greeneryand clean nature will disappear diseases like asthma and gives marvellous health and exquisite living. Perhaps by this we can enurmerously preserve our surroundings for upcoming fourth generations.
however, a few people believe that high tech can solve the problem.As soil pollution is destroying the earth but with the help of robotics on one click without using manpower we can recycled the waste. Apparently people cherish and are ardent of telecommunications which comes handy and need of the hour by one phone call the they can connect the appropriate authorities and save life. For instance one of friends had seen tortoise with plastic all over his legs on the beach she instantly called a department who sent labours, not only they saved the baby tortoise, with the help of volunteer locals they cleaned the beach too with enthusiasm so with the help of automation they stopped water pollution.
To conclude,we have intense temptation of technology and it made our life so easy however living a basic life give as harmonious relationships with our loved onces and gives as plenty of time to clean our nature and secure it is irrefutable that if it is gone once it will be impossible to retrieve it back and our next generations will be left with nothing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... employment if we stop using mechniery. Furthermore like our ancestors mostly people will w...
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...ndings for upcoming fourth generations. however, a few people believe that high ...
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...ve that high tech can solve the problem.As soil pollution is destroying the earth ...
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...one click without using manpower we can recycled the waste. Apparently people cherish an...
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...ogy and it made our life so easy however living a basic life give as harmonious r...
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...nature and secure it is irrefutable that if it is gone once it will be impossible...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, thus, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95821727019 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73376155771 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593314763231 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.338012567 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.333333333 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9166666667 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134282887953 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533841792888 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387523672613 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882101497242 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483122225619 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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