Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.
There are numerous laws enforced for the purposes of safeguarding the interests of the people as well the government from the businesses and vice versa. However, one should not forget that they are a contributor to the economy, provide jobs and in no case any entity be allowed to cross limits to misuse the freedom given to them. I disagree with the statement. The essay will be followed by the opinion in the end.
Firstly, there are many checks which are enforced by the government to make sure that the quality standards are met by the companies who are in the manufacturing business. However, there are some organizations who in order to make huge profits tend to by-pass the guidelines, the same should in the manner be allowed. For instance, a few years ago Johnson & Johnson had come out with a painkiller which was defective and in turn caused issues for many people. It was later revealed that in order to maximize profits the company did not use a chemical but rather chose a cheap alternative. The company was fined and asked to pay damages to people. Thus, the companies should not be allowed to jeopardize the safety of the people.
Secondly, if the organizations are set free it will lead to rampant environmental issues across the country. The companies will go on a spree to destroy the ecological balance to gather the resources which are available in abundance naturally and showing no regard for environmental protection. For example, in the 1990’s when the timber business was unregulated the companies had destroyed half of the green cover. Therefore, the entities should not be allowed to do business as they please.
In conclusion, the companies are there for purposes of giving services to people and should not focus on profits but rather on gaining the customer base. Once the customer is gained slowly and steadily the profit margins will go up.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.896875 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74242760208 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7981035941 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9375 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149232273156 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587126751589 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707750784647 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863153027016 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214420282361 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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