Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world.” Use reasons and details to support your opinion
Most people agree that modern technology have affected various part of the society in different ways. Personally I believe that the access to the internet is of great beneficial to both the individual and community and nation as a whole. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraph.
First of all Internet contains a lot of job websites, which people us to start career or find jobs. In the past, people had to go through pages of newspaper seeking for the vacancy post. However, after the introduction of the internet, job seeker can simple log into the job seeking sites containing numerous vacancy announcement by companies in a single go. As a result, they are able to easily find their desirable job. My personal experience is a compelling illustration for this. After my graduation, I was seeking a specific post for billing and estimating engineer in a reputable construction company. Although I went through number of vacancy announcement in magazines and newspaper for sever week, I was unable to find my related job. Then after many failed attempt I tried seeking job through the use of internet website and I was successful in finding the job i was seeking within an hour, which would have been impossible without the use of World Wide Web.
Furthermore, the Internet makes it easy to communicate with our love one even if we are far from them, which reduces our loneliness. In countries all over the globe, people are using different social media sites to get in contact with their loved ones and relatives who are distance apart. For instance, few years back, due to my job posting I had to live in vey secluded place. I was not able to have any interaction with my family and friends. This bothered me a lot, furthermore this situation also made me unhappy and my anxiety was increasing. However, later I use internet video calling to get in touch with my near ones. When I start getting in contact with them via video chat, it decreased my anxiety and was able to coop with my new environment as a result became happy and was able to focus on my job. This would not have been possible without the internet.
In conclusion, I strongly feels internet have positive effect in our life and have become intricate part of our life. This is because it helps in accelerating our career and because of internet we are able to strengthen our bond with family and friends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 871, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...and I was successful in finding the job i was seeking within an hour, which would...
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Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...act with their loved ones and relatives who are distance apart. For instance, few years...
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Line 4, column 27, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'feel'
Suggestion: feel
...he internet. In conclusion, I strongly feels internet have positive effect in our li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1995.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 424.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70518867925 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66231592524 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530660377358 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 644.4 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3090984036 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1904761905 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127561589304 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038994589402 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403590520097 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829119114387 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211815102316 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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