Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People who have achieved success in their lives, do not fear experimenting in order to create new things instead of staying focused in areas where they have expertise. I completely agree with the view that venturing into new projects is common among successful people.
To begin with, well established persons are by nature hard working and creative, so they continuously engage in exploring new avenues of growth. In other words, having the constant urge to learn new skills and acquiring more knowledge on untouched areas, lead them to inventing new things. Take, for example Mark Zukerberg, the inventor of facebook, who came up with a unique idea of social network, has taken initiative in many similar areas. Another glaring example is that of, Elon Musk, one of the most successful businessmen in the contemporary world, has revolutionized travel both on earth through Tesla electric cars , and in space by way of space X. These inventions would not have been possible, if these eminent people had not been diligent and determined in their work.
Another point to consider is that being able to reach the pinnacle of success, brings with it huge financial success, which is a vital reason that draws people toward trying new things.The presence of readily available funds or investments, often encourages people to dive into risky projects, which if executed well, certainly reaps tremendous benefits. In contrast, even if they fail, they don’t lose much owing to the reason that they have much backing and support from the investors, who prefer to invest in the projects undertaken by successful entrepreneurs because of their business acumen.
In conclusion, creating something different from what others are making , is very much required in the present world, where there is cut-throat competition in every field.
And this is mainly done by the wealthy and prosperous people due to the fact that they are more focused, imaginative , and they have more availability of resources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21428571429 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7206090512 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.8228198761 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.636363636 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2727272727 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222988902896 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730691022091 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043443099063 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106121002775 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633875239789 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.