Do you think a museum is to educate or entertain people?
In the first half of the twenty first century, museums are deemed to have striking implications on people’s comprehension of history and culture. Although educational values of museums are mainly accredited by a myriad of individuals, included myself, some have rebutted this notion, believing that entertaining aspects should not dismisses, as well.
Museums, of any kind, have a contributing factor to instruct cultural and historical heritage of a specific region. Historical museums, as a salient instance, depict culture transformation of a nation by means of artefacts, ancient specimen and objects of historical value. Topkapi museum in Turkey, as one of the most attention-grabbing setting in the world, not only does illustrate the changes of literature and architecture of country through medieval era, but also has manifold samples of the warriors’ fighting equipment, including swords and shields, evolving through history. Instructive of such exemplars, hence, are more far-reaching than the shortly amusing time following an entertaining program.
On the other hand, similar to other educational institutions, museums should provide some pleasurable programs to absorb more visitors and cover costs. In this regard, the better periodically held festivals such as art galleries are compromised into the museums’ yearly schedules, the more visitors, tourists in particular, are earnest to participate and more admission fee could be collected, therefore. Hardly ever, however, do entertaining programs have long-lasting influence on visitors in comparison with the unforgettable history and culture know-how obtained, if wisely been grasped.
In way of conclusion, museums should consider both instructive and entertaining features for their visitors, albeit educational purposes, as museums are originally based on, have more deeply ingrained impacts on one’s mind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, in particular, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.01470588235 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29871003413 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650735294118 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.7431167583 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.6 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208685887584 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072875240332 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550410234503 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130826088192 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537532426983 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.69 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 11.3001002004 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.87 12.4159519038 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.59 8.58950901804 135% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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