In many nations, doctors have found that people are not getting enough exercise. This essay will discuss the causes of inadequate exercise due to imbalanced work timings and unhealthy lifestyles among individuals. This essay will suggest how to get proper exercise by maintaining a balance between personal and professional life and how to lead a healthy lifestyle.
Nowadays, people tend to spend most of their time in office. A major part of the people follows an unhealthy lifestyle. In the race for climbing up the corporate ladder, many forgets the difference between home and office. Long working hours cause a lack of exercise. An abundance of ready-made foods also leads to an unhealthy lifestyle. According to a survey, IT professionals are the ones who lack proper exercise. Moreover, it has been proven that junk foods deprive indulging in physical activities. To sum up, an imbalanced work-life and an unhealthy life causes scarcity in exercise.
The remedy should be maintaining a proper balance between professional and personal lives with a healthy lifestyle. A calculated balance between work and personal life gives ample time to invest in exercises. In addition, one should not get addicted to junk foods. Rather people should have proper diet and fitness training. For example, dieticians have become increasingly popular these days who can guide regarding proper diet and how to invest time in exercise. In conclusion, avoiding junk food and finding a proper ratio between work and personal life can solve the issue.
People lacking exercise in some particular nations, believed by medical experts. This essay discussed that less exercise due to a bad work-life balance and following an unhealthy lifestyle. This essay also suggested that having a proper balance between office and oneself with maintaining a healthy lifestyle can resolve this issue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, while, apart from, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2040.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39682539683 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78019644556 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494708994709 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 644.4 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2374934789 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.368421053 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8947368421 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78947368421 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158597282543 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569162744357 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508343733139 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118112252211 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557690075172 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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