Doctors in many countries are saying that people are not getting enough physical exercises. What do you think about the cause of this problem? How can you address this?
Physical activities are indispensable to keep up prosperous health. It has been observed that physicians are regularly emphasizing on this matter. This will discuss the reasons behind the less physical activity and put forward several solutions for this.
To begin with, the foremost reasons behind this human inactivity are changes brought by the modern lifestyle and lack of work-life balance. Nowadays everything is advanced and modern technologies invented a lot of products that make humans very lazy. For example, in olden days students used to go to school by walk and this helped them to become physically active and kept obesity away. But nowadays parents see this as a prestige issue and force their child to go by vehicles and it reduces the physical activity in students. Moreover, multinational companies are more interested in profits rather than their employee's health. This creates tense full and prolonged office hours and reduces the chances of proper exercises. To illustrate this, most of the IT employees are struggling with health-related issues in their late forties because of lack of physical activities in daily life.
Finally, the important remedies to these problems are an awareness from the government to the public and stringent the rules on IT companies. Even though maintaining health is one's personal responsibility, the government can take necessary steps here. They can advertise the benefits of exercise in one's life, through visual media and awareness programs aiming especially parents to make them understand how to grow the children with proper physical activities. Moreover, the state can introduce more public parks in the cities and promote cycles among young people to make the next generation healthier. Additionally, the officials should make rules which will help employees to get a balanced life and warns the employer if any cases of improper work-life balance have reported. To illustrate this, in Australia, the government has introduced a policy that enforces IT companies to include games activities in office hours. It ensures that the workforce of that company will be getting proper physical activities. In short, both government and citizens as a whole can contribute to building a healthy society.
To recapitulate, this essay discussed the causes of lack in physical activities such as changes in modern lifestyle and improper work-life balance. In addition, this essay discussed the solutions to this such as awareness to people and stringent rules from officials.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in short, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2140.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41772151899 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85769523353 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549367088608 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 678.6 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8608918961 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202040273601 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629964161109 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400287756181 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136085740877 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202862592499 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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