Social media marketing can influence what consumers buy. Do you agree or disagree? To what extent do you agree?

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Social media marketing can influence what consumers buy. Do you agree or disagree? To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays each and every companies has it's own marketing team and this team is responsible for finding out different ways of it's product marketing. As the technology improved, this marketing team also started to think of different areas where they have to focus more to get maximum attention. One of the answer to this seek was social media. I believe that social media has its own control over what customers purchase from market.

To begin with, in this era Social media is the place where people spend most of their time. Multinational giants foresee this trend and started preparing their marketing canvases on social medias. To illustrate this internationally leading e-commerce companies like Amazon.com and Flipcart have their own IT wing to develop applications. These applications push updates about their new products to social media sites such as Facebook and people are always watching it, attracted to buy that product. It shows the vital role of social medias in todays market.

Additionally, it has been visible that the advancement of technology attract people to social websites. They can search their interests, wishes, desires and everything else. Click-stream analysis is one of the major technology which has been used by international companies to identify the likes and dislikes of people who browse internet. Using this captured data, they can easely identify the interests of humans and suggest particular products which match with their desire. For example, most companies are using machine learning technology with predictive analysis to identify the likes and dislikes of people and do suggestions. With the help of these modern technologies, companies can easily attract buyers through social medias.

To summarise, by using the most modern technologies, multinational companies have their own control over the market. Using this advertising power, they directly influence the buyers.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47811447811 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79780759335 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542087542088 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7358474974 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7058823529 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4705882353 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88235294118 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138053330624 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528930282045 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432407579121 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817525443258 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028440708311 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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