Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of small shops will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Undoubtedly, sophisticated modern technology has had great influence on people in these days and businesses are operated on large level. Many argue that huge super centres would take over small business units and those may be shut down due to the popularity of branded products and commodities. While i believe that big shopping complexes dominates miner enterprises, the profound importance of local shops can not be overlooked.
On the one hand, supermarkets has been developed up to large extent and offer wide range of items. Firstly, in this contemporary era public is able to buy a variety of things under one roof as today businesses put endeavours in providing convenience to its customers. Therefore, individuals prefer to shop from reputed stores to make sure that they are purchasing products with superior quality instead of cheaper ones. Secondly, shopping online from social websites such as amazon, zara, flip cart is becoming extremely popular nowadays as in this modern age everyone wants fast services. That is why, owing to the advent of e- commerce people tend to buy stuff online instead of going anywhere physically to save precious time and money. Finally, majority of products are sold in bigger and high-rated super centres because of fixed prices as in shops people has to bargain for lowering down the prices. However, in malls the store keepers sale products at reasonable prices. As a result, in order to use money at optimum level masses go to shop in super markets where they can get guarantee, warranties and after sale services.
On the other hand, even though major business units has more potential to survive than small shops. I believe that local shops cater the needs of people living in towns and countryside. First of all, local societies are best served by small shops as these are in proximity and closeness to them and can buy basic things over there. Consequently, it is really hard for them to commute to cities for visiting supermarkets which are situated in metropolitan cities. Besides this, if there will be no retail shops, the people who are unprivileged would be deprive of basic necessities as they can not afford the expenses of branded products which results in their poor lifestyles.
To conclude, although i believe that supermarkets are famous for shopping today, the local shops are the integral part of the lives of people and their pivotal role can not be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2032.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04218362283 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66720640151 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590570719603 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.658122919 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.529411765 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7058823529 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5882352941 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177856717959 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559775240952 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412974596288 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120122525392 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322670606516 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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