Eating too much sugar is harmful for health. Some people think that it is government responsibility to limit people sugar consumption, while others think that it is individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both view and give your opinion
It is often argued that the excessive intake of sugar should be controlled by government authorities, while others believe that sugar consumption in daily diet should be regulated at personal level. Through this essay, I shall put light on both the aspects and will explain why governments' efforts are more important.
There are certain valid reasons due to which people tend to believe that higher authorities are considered responsible for reducing the use of sugar. Firstly, governments can impose heavy taxes on the sugar items that leads to limited sale of these products. In Australia, for instance, it has been seen that after increasing the taxes on such products, people are avoiding these sugar products. Secondly, governments can arrange awareness campaigns to educate public about the ill effects of sugar. A good illustration for this is that many people have been influenced by such campaign programs broadcasted by officials. Due to aforementioned reasons people have opinion that governments can take preventive measures to control sugar in daily use.
On the contrary, it is said that regulation of sugar intake in diet is feasible at an individual level. Every person has his own metabolic rate and they know their limitations about how to control the sugar level. For example, a person who consumes higher sugar can look after the sugar concentration in the body by doing regular exercise. In addition to this, by changing routine diet plan and strict check on sugar intake, various diseases, due to malfunctioning of body organs, can be avoided. Hence, with the help of exercise and disciplined diet, sugar level in the body can be regulated. However, I believe, in the present day, these methods are difficult to follow.
In conclusion, although sugar level can be controlled by proper workout and limited use of sweet products, I strongly believe that the legislative powers can play a pivotal role to reduce the consumption of sugar by imposing tax and awareness campaigning. This would lead to a effective measure and everyone can live a healthy life.
- Eating too much sugar is harmful for health. Some people think that it is government responsibility to limit people sugar consumption, while others think that it is individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both view and 73
- Eating too much sugar is harmful for health. Some people think that it is government responsibility to limit people sugar consumption, while others think that it is individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both view and 84
- Sugar is not good for health Some people think that government is responsible for limiting the consumption of sugar While others think that it is an individual who should be responsible for how much sugar he should eat Discuss both the views and give your 42
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...areness campaigning. This would lead to a effective measure and everyone can live...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16272189349 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80901384902 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55325443787 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8134807308 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0625 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8125 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27387155864 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958059876809 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511358398544 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164823139591 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559293927099 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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