Eating too much sugar is harmful to our health. Some people think that it is the government responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption, while others think that it is an individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Higher intake of sugar has devastating effects on human health. It is thought by many that higher authorities are responsible for barring sugar intake of the nation, while others advocate that persons are responsible for the quantity of sugar they consume on a daily basis. However, in my opinion, I consider that the daily consumption of sugar should be according to the need of the individual’s body. This essay will discuss both views followed by a reasoned opinion.
On the one hand, government elites have the authority to reduce sugar intake in numerous ways to a safer level. They can add more tax on the sugar sales and purchase due to which price of sugar will inflate and less purchase will be observed hence resulting in lower sugar consumption. I believe that sugar is one of the basic necessities of life and everyone has the right to access. For instance, In the United Kingdom average weight of people were increasing to an alarming level thus government implemented taxes on sugar products but people with genuine need suffer a lot and did protest to remove the tax on sugar products.
On the other hand, sugar consumption varies according to the body need. People with diabetic diseases are of two types one with the hyperglycemic level and they need to cut down sugar intake while another type is of hypoglycemic and they need to add more to their daily intake. Similarly, people with lots of physical activity like sports athletes, mason burns lots of calories and they need to maintain the normal glycemic level in the body. So people must adjust the amount according to the body need.
To recapitulate, people may vary in their opinions about responsibility whether its government or individuals, I believe that everybody has the right to increase or decrease according to their body demand consider health issues related to it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, similarly, so, thus, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96805111821 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70240707731 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5303514377 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.2531455098 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.615384615 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313369533065 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111820154499 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498505808379 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179819669789 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673852673221 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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