Write a letter to the restaurant's manager. In your letter,Explain that you would like to apply for the job.Give some details of any relevent experience that you have.specify days and times that would suit you.

Essay topics:

Write a letter to the restaurant's manager. In your letter,

Explain that you would like to apply for the job.

Give some details of any relevent experience that you have.

specify days and times that would suit you.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my interest in the post of a part-time cook you are offering in your restaurant. I have seen the job advertisement, which was published in the Daily Times, last Sunday. My name is Sara Khan, and I am looking for an odd job to bear my educational expenses. As I live in the vicinity of your restaurant and with culinary expertise, I consider myself perfect for the same post.

What is more, my graduation was completed in 2018, in culinary arts. I have hands-on cooking food and presentation, not to mention, I am a one-year diploma holder in Hotel and restaurant management from the New York School of Food Sciences. I also did a part-time job in New York along with my studies.

Now, I am doing my master's studies, and I attend classes four days a week that is from Monday to Thursday, so I think the weekend would be more convenient for me to join you. I have attached my resume and all testimonials along with this letter. If a chance were given to me, I would leave no stone unturned in discharging my duties.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

Sara Khan

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, i think, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65853658537 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7625437243 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619512195122 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8878231447 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5833333333 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202084057538 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697899629327 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417796036101 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121984667162 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439473128387 0.0580467560999 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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