In many countries, people have health problems because they choose to live in unhealthy ways. What do you think the reasons for this and how can it be solved?
Some would argue that due to the adaptation of an unhealthy lifestyle, the health and fitness levels of people are declining at a staggering rate. In my opinion, I believe that lack of physical activity and fast food addiction are the most viable reasons; however, this problem can be solved by cultivating awareness on the importance of a healthy lifestyle.
To embark with, the prevalent cause of health problems is a desk-bound lifestyle. Because many people are doing odd jobs along with full-time jobs so they became lazy and physically inactive. Many people spend their whole day sitting in front of laptops and computers. This lack of physical exercise leads to many health problems such as heart disease, diabetes, and bone diseases. Secondly, nowadays, people are addicted to ready-made meals due to their unique taste. Being aware of health repercussions, people are unable to stop consuming fast food because of their irresistible taste. Therefore, due to the continuous consumption of high-calorie diet, people suffer from obesity and many cardiovascular ailments. For example, health practitioners have revealed that the oil used for making fast food causes blockage of the arteries, which reduces the blood supply to the heart, and causes death.
Nevertheless, the primary solution to overcome this concern is to create public awareness. The government should lodge a campaign on the national level on media, schools, and workplaces to educate people about the possible dangers of bad routine. Therefore, guidebooks and brochures should be distributed among people containing necessary information, it will increase the knowledge of people and they will learn the advantages of a healthy lifestyle. For instance, a similar initiative has been taken in Germany, where the mortality rate was more as compared to other developing countries, due to this initiative it results in a healthier nation.
To conclude, the reasons for burgeoning health problems in nations are scarcity of exercise, and eating fattening food; however, these issues can be addressed by educating nations by highlighting the importance of a healthier lifestyle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49101796407 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92997995398 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592814371257 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7903752912 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.266666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298832246269 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866779880518 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370421707017 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161408741877 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442402942272 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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