Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth.Do you agree or disagree?

Essay topics: Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth.
Do you agree or disagree?

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It is argue that education is not an element of lavishness, and it should be dealt with charge free as a fundamental life principle regardless of individual possession. It is agree that people’s indispensable living rule learning should be liberated disregard of private properties and not an item of extravagance. This essay will discuss first the no cost schooling can change parents’ awareness and secondly the fact that learner could break the social status barrier.
All parents are not conceiving same attention about education. Some of them believe that their offspring could develop in life to concentrate other business rather than going to school. When it becomes charge free, parents with such thought will re-asses their choice even though they are rich. For instance, Bangladesh government took the decision full free tuition fee for women primary and high school and the reap benefits is literacy rate bring up 50% to 70% within two decades.
Society has yet to accept that fancy educational provision available only for affluent family’s children. Recent statistics shows that 15% young people drop of their study because of such believe that they cannot appear appropriate educational service compare to their social economical condition. Government policy should prevailed such believe by generating analogous educational process for all as human essential living right.
In conclusion, I agree with the opinion that the expenditure of education system should be cost free as living right without consideration of personal ownership, because it has benefit for changing mindset of society and resolve communal distinction.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'argued'.
Suggestion: argued
It is argue that education is not an element of lav...
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Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...ardless of individual possession. It is agree that people's indispensable living...
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Line 2, column 409, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e for women primary and high school and the reap benefits is literacy rate bring up 50% ...
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Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...ple drop of their study because of such believe that they cannot appear appropriate edu...
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Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...Government policy should prevailed such believe by generating analogous educational pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56126482213 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87900102623 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667984189723 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.390115786 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.909090909 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242332554633 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846123058404 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765742565704 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149513269093 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584892520199 0.056905535591 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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