Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
This is now very common when a person applies for a job there is a column of personal information which has to be filled in the application form. Many people think that there is no benefit of such information in jobs while others think that it can be helpful in some situations. This will discuss why giving such information leads to leakage of privacy of workers but how this information helps in emergency problems.
To begin with, many employers when hiring employees asking to fill personal information like name, phone number, hobbies, etc. However, there is a chance that the personal details of the employee can be used in a negative way. Sometimes the company managers irritate their female staff by calling them on their personal numbers. For instance, in yesterday's newspaper, there is news of one female staff who complains to the police because the company manager is calling her late at night.
Besides having some negative points there is also a benefit of sharing personal history with the organization. If for example, any of the company staff got missing the personal information that time helps in finding that employee parent. In addition, hobbies and interests tell the company how actively a particular employee can manage and handle the projects.
To conclude, it is true that sharing personal information nowadays is very risky because it can be misused by the organization owner and their managers but in my opinion, I would say sharing personal particulars with the company helps in a situation like emergencies and also helps in tracking the record of their employees.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05283018868 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70149148579 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539622641509 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.496510072 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.727272727 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9090909091 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259705694158 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988832033499 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568088897785 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15413021646 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804089065117 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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