employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. others disagree
In the present age, more and more companies require job applicants to answer a questionnaris in the application process. But in the meantime, whether employers should ask the applicants for personal information or not has become a controversial issue. Although there is a huge horde of people who discord this notion, there are equivalent people who rather strongly advocate it. Before rendering my opinion, I think it is important to take a glance at the arguments on both sides.
People support this action because they believe that those information, such as the applicants’ hobbies and interests, are relevant and useful because it is a good way for employers to find out if the candidates fit the team or not. Plenty of evidence has shown that employees, who understand more about the company’s culture, are more likely to work harder and more happily, and the work results are always better because the company is a real team. People who share the same value are much easier to corporate with each other.
By contrast, some other stand on a very different ground. They point out that that personal information is not related to the candidate’s work abilities, and sometimes, employers may have bias on those applicants and the employers should not judge the job applicants by their personal lives. In fact, more and more employers in China ask female candidates their marriage status, even how many kids they have, because the employers believe married candidates, especially the ones have children, are better because they won’t have maternity leave in the future.
Having considered the respective merits of both vies, I would say that there is no definite answer to this question. As far as I am concerned, some personal information can be used to determine if the candidate is a good fit or not, such as hobbies and interests. However, some information, such as marriage status or how many children they have should not be a reason to reject a applicant and this is a discrimination.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'those informations'?
Suggestion: this information; those informations
...t this action because they believe that those information, such as the applicants' hobbies a...
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Line 7, column 381, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...y have should not be a reason to reject a applicant and this is a discrimination....
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Line 7, column 423, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...applicant and this is a discrimination.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, i think, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0628742515 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93280704546 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535928143713 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.8470207078 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.076923077 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6923076923 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32068485562 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107752614149 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771619009156 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184173528288 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164532183254 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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