Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Job applicants asked to fill personal information’s by the employers, Such as hobbies, interests and about their marital status. While some people believe this information is perhaps necessary and beneficial, others oppose it. I stand with the latter group shall explain the reasons in detail in this essay.
First, we live in an era where fashion, Style, science and technology is rapidly advancing,Employers seek talents that has adequate skills and creativity besides good qualification, For instance if a person’s hobby is sketching, these skills help’s him to work on projects that need appealing Product looks and outshine in his career prospects, and benefits employers to be competitive. Besides this, employers seek candidates’ marital status, as this is essential to offer better health Insurance plans to candidates and his/her family and other benefits such as sponsoring scholarship for their kids’ education etc...
However, there are some flaws associated in sharing personal information; for instance, some employers’ seek marital details due to the fact that candidates with single marital status work long hours when compared with that of the married ones, because bachelors do not have family commitments and it is beneficial to employers to carry out their projects before deadlines moreover, make more profits. Hence, they choose Singles than married ones; this kills job opportunities for married ones.
Therefore, I partially agree that sharing personal information is useful for professional growth.However, it affects the moral and would make difficult to balance work and life of the job seekers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Employers
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73684210526 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19014981533 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676113360324 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.284703403 49.4020404114 252% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 177.125 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.875 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.875 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284508041056 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121159559355 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431175531811 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159364700806 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400829182378 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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