Even though doctors all over the world agree that fast food is bad for people health,more and more people eating it.why are more people eating fast food? What can be done about this problem?
It is a fact that eating fast food can be harmful for human health. Many physicians have been alarming people about its ill effect, but still its comsumption is on rise.This essay will discuss the causes for the increase of this food habit, and will offer some solution to the problem.
To begin with, the most important factor for the rise in consumption of junk food can be attributed to human lifestyle.Many people have busy routine nowadays because of which it is difficult to prepare meals that are healthy. As a result, individual end up eating food outside which is easily available. For instance, an employee who has to start early for office, mostly eats junk food in cafeteria to meet hunger requirements. Additionally, mankind gets influenced by the adverts promoting fast food options. Henceforth, they may find these eatables attractive to be tried and tasted.
There are various measures which can be implemented to reduce consumption rate of fast food. Firstly, the government should levy tax on junk food.This will refrain people to buy these food because of its high price. Secondly, authorities should arrange campaigns that spreads awareness among people about the detrimental effect it has on an individual's health. Lastly, advertisements by famous celebrities promoting unhealthy food should be discouraged as people follow them and believe whatever they say is true.
In conclusion, limitation of free time and influence caused by advertisement industry could cause people to divert towards fast food. However, these unhealthy food options can be reduced by solutions mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, still, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3125 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83665839667 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62890625 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0623280161 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.615384615 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377380386629 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137992976571 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649093451568 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244574218759 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493652214112 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.