Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Generally speaking, deciding which is better - life as teenager or as an adult - is very subjective.Many people believe that adolescence is the time when one is very happy. Whilst there are others who opines that adulthood is when a person cherishes his/her life the most. this essay discusses both the views, and my agreement on former.
it is truely said that with age comes responsibility. As an adult, a person has many activities to be taken up in day today routine because of which finding time for onself becomes challenging. For instance, work to earn a living, and then to take care of household chores as well. As a result, people tend to forget his own interests and hobby. Furthermore, priority shifts from oneself to taking care of family which includes managing regular expenses and bills, and education of children, etc.
there are several advantages of teenage year. Firstly,a person is more responsible to taking care of oneself. this age is filled with enthusiasm, living carefree life.Secondly, it also includes doing everything which is of interest and offers more daring to take new risks. For instance, a person goes alongwith his friends on hiking, or adventurous trips. Lastly, there is no pressure of making money for living, as this aspect of life is taken care by parents. Henceforth, less sacrifices and compromises towards life at adolescence adds more happy moments to cherish in long run.
To summarize, moments of happiness are more in teenage years than as an adulthood since risk taking capacity is more in young days. However, the right age to be content is life depends on person to person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, for instance, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00735294118 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77010905605 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606617647059 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5347948015 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.125 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153573428174 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497311175041 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407158561012 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990219980274 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421797882148 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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