It is often said that retirement is the happiest time of a person’s life. How far do you agree with this view?
Generally speaking, any individual's perspective towards the phenomenon - retirement - is very subjective. However, many people believe that the retirement can lead to the happiest moments of life, and there are lot of benefits associated with it. I agree with the argument, and the essay will support the view in detail.
To begin with, there are many compelling advantages of getting retired from work. Firstly, a man reaches a point wherein he can pursue all the interests that he has been longing to do in his earlier time of living. This is because early stage of life is mostly spent in earning money to satisfy family needs, and to have enough savings which could be utilised in later phase of existence. Moreover, these savings can then be used at the retirement stage to opt for activities that are long pending dreams. For instance, some people prefer to go on vacation or even travel the world, as there is pressure of work or restriction of limited holidays when he is into job.
Secondly, retired professionals can spend more happy moments with their family and friends. They are seen mostly meeting their relatives, kids, and grandchildren. In addition, few people contribute their time doing certain community work, which gives them satisfaction and a sense of achievement in the years to come. For example, in a survey it was proven that 60% of crowd who are doing charity of educating unprivileged kids are often retired people.
In conclusion, it is said that if an individual plans and contemplates their retirement wisely, then can be more rewarding and fullfiling in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
Generally speaking, any individuals perspective towards the phenomenon - re...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ivileged kids are often retired people. In conclusion, it is said that if an ind...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...warding and fullfiling in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02247191011 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75572775526 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644194756554 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6386998883 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.153846154 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218879217646 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695138711271 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463043048547 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122980255508 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496676932088 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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