Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?
It is a fact that use of plastic bags has harmful effects on the ecosystem and is contributing to global warming. Many people often argue that the polyethylene shopping products should be banned to reduce the damage done to the environment. This essay agrees with the argument and will discuss the opinion in detail.
To begin with, the most important factor to stop the usage of plastic products can be attributed to the decrease in number of sea animals.This happens because at times plastic wastes are dumped in sea water, and then the aquatic animals consume them, which leads to their death. For instance, recently a dead whale was found on the coast of Philippines and upon inspection researchers concluded that 40kgs of plastic was present in the stomach of the mammal. Moreover, plastic is non-biodegradable and hence they cannot perish easily. These implications makes plastic a threat to marine life.
Furthermore, the pollution caused to the landfills proves to be a strong reason for banning the havoc of plastic bags. The increased utilisation of the material is leading to contamination of soil and ground water.Water, being such a crucial element for human survival, will no longer be fit for consumption if not protected from the detrimental effects of plastic. In addition, the plastic bags available in shopping stores are manufactured from chemicals that upon inflammation might affect the atmosphere and could add impurities to the surroundings.
In conclusion, the life wrenching effects of plastic on the land and sea, such as death of marine animals and devastation of soil and water, justifies why many people are against the usage of these products. Therefore, making it evident that banning the products could protect the ecosystem for better sustainability in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20962199313 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93031855046 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584192439863 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.5073555663 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.333333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240247157645 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802384740717 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423230727625 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138929547528 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398619544455 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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