You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
It is argued that commercials are influencing humans to purchase unnecessary products. Many people believe adverts are challenging buying habits of crowd, while others are of opinion that these products are improving living lifestyle. I agree with the latter part, and this essay will the facts in detail.
To begin with, mankind lives in an era where the phenomena - seeing is believing - dominates the society. Because of which proper analysis and knowledge of a product before buying is essential. Henceforth, advertisement in such cases plays a vital role. For instance, making right choice of picking an oil brand is significant in driving a healthier life, and this clarity is available at the touch of fingertips by watching various goods displayed on television sets. In addition, a video clip of customer reivews on a product makes it evident and safe to buy a product.
Furthermore, the advertisments contributes in spreading awareness to the society by distinguishing between products that could cause potential risks to the world. For example, certain products make use of polyethylene wrapper which are polluting the environment. In such situation, lesser use or banning the product should be a call of a responsible citizen. Moreover, certain product manufacturers donate a fixed percentage earned through an item to a charitable trust, making world a better place to live.
In conclusion, although advertisements has certain drawbacks, its advantages outweighs the demerits. Acknowledging the difference between a healthy and harmful option as shown in adverts should be the parameters to make right choice.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... in an era where the phenomena - seeing is believing - dominates the society. Because of whi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46825396825 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10810252736 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9525228444 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4285714286 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11435795058 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382591222834 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277717076376 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0669285584017 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0129946141273 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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