A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter
Describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team
Simmarise the benefits of paying for the concerts
Say how you think the company should spend the money
Dear Sir,
I am a resident of ABC colony, and it gives me immense pleasure to hear that your company is willing to contribute a certain amount of money in either sponsoring sports team or in arranging concerts in our area.
Firstly, sports has played a significant role in our life. Thus, sponsoring a sports team for children will be a boost and an act of encouragement for the young ones towards a healthy body and a fit mind. Additionally, this will also increase branch value for the company.
Furthermore, respect for arts is best possible through the medium of open-air concerts. In addition, these acts will open doors for many who wants to experience different aspect of life. Moreover, this will be great to advertise products manufactured at your place.
Although concerts has several benefits, investment in sport activity outweighs the former one because this will bring community closer to each other. Henceforth, I would request you to sponsor a sports team for next two years.
Thank you for your co-operation.
Yours faithfully,
SD90
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 31, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...mpany. Furthermore, respect for arts is best possible through the medium of open-air...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11428571429 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81607050005 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691428571429 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6614619563 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3636363636 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 4.34317383033 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332493824806 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116323956094 0.0766984524023 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078104723656 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174158308303 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270204290209 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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