Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor.
What are some of the reasons for world poverty?
How can the poor be helped?
Poor people are present in every country, and each nation has their own system to support them in providing basic things such as food, clothing, and education and employment opportunities. The most important reason, for the world's poverty is that many government schemes are unable to reach right people. One plausible solution could be creating job avenues in order to bring them up in life.
Countries such India and China population density is high, hence, many government benefits are not reaching the poor people. Additionally, many corrupted politicians and government officers are lootings the government fund allocated to provide basic necessities. Furthermore, many nations are lacking sufficient fund due to tax evasion by rich business magnets. For instance, in India, many big firms are not paying their tax instead they claim false proofs to evade tax to the nation; this affects the revenue of the country. Moreover, many poor people are unemployed hence, they rely the government's support to live their life.
To overcome this trend, the government need to create more jobs to benefit poor people. Nepotism is the biggest threat in various industries; the employment firms should ensure right candidate get the suitable job. Similarly, improving the education and medical facilities are vital, since many poor people are totally rely on such facilities. In addition, the government need improved mechanism to find black money and to punish tax evaders; this would ensure the nation collects more tax money, which could benefit poor people.
In conclusion, creating more jobs for poor people would improve their living standards; also the government ought to ensure that benefits for the penniless people are reaching them without any obstacles. Such measures would slowly ensure the quality of life of poverty-stricken people to a great extent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...ies. The most important reason, for the worlds poverty is that many government schemes...
Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
...he government fund allocated to provide basic necessities. Furthermore, many nations are lacking ...
Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'relied'.
...tal, since many poor people are totally rely on such facilities. In addition, the go...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, similarly, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40753424658 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66717948523 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561643835616 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.448263631 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.785714286 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192562417955 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707127768279 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527810935142 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12757306862 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318249174201 0.056905535591 56% => OK
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.