Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In every developed country, medical facilities, including advanced and expensive treatments, are provided to its citizens free of cost and it is possible only because such countries have highly developed and established systems and services. I believe that the government of every country should be responsible enough to provide its people with free health services but it cannot be possible for underdeveloped countries.
Those countries are striving hard to access basic needs; it would not be their priority to provide people with medical facilities but to offer them necessities like food, shelter, and clothing. To be capable of having such facilities, it is crucial to understand the complete cycle of systems. In developed countries, their administration is well organized and equipped with the latest technology. Their citizens pay their taxes with honesty and responsibility which enable governments to establish free services like health. This can be possible in developed countries only because their people have employment and regular income sources. Whereas, citizens of third world countries do not have either of those then how can they submit taxes and ultimately would not get free health services. Therefore, this cannot be applied to all governments but facts should not be ignored.
However, developed states should necessarily help people in establishing cost-free hospital services. They should cover the cost of any disease no matter whether minor or major; basic or chronicle. It is their first and foremost obligation to introduce policies and laws which give support to the pharmaceutical industry so that they conduct more research in identifying better ways of cure.
To conclude, the provision of free medical assistance by the governments should be their top preference, but many third world countries spend their funds in other critical areas, such as in offering a safe place of living and food to its citizens. Therefore, this facility, undoubtedly, should be cost-free but not every nation can have it.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, then, therefore, third, well, whereas, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45569620253 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8913523276 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54746835443 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4445046045 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.142857143 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241347927606 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919847911923 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494340978893 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155414979356 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050090912471 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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