Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Health care industry has evolved in its own way over past few decades. The concept of Free Health care is always debatable in this modern era. The free health care with less access to advanced medical treatment will be quite useful for the middle class and lower middle class people in any country across the world. In my opinion, the free medical facilities with its limitation will benefit majority of the population .
The concept of paying for an insurance is considered as a substitute for free health care, This is widely used in the US and in some parts of Europe. This is highly recommended because the insurance will cover for the major illnesses and it’s prolonged treatments. This opens a lot of possibilities and options for a patient to have a safer option than spending a lot of money. For example, A person having a heart condition will be covered by his insurance company for his treatments. This reduces the patient’s risk of going into mortgages or spending a lot of his life savings. The insurance covers lots of risk factors when someone falls critically ill and needs a treatments which they cannot afford.
However, the concept of having to pay to visit a doctor every time when someone falls sick is hard for the lower middle class people. They think that the money that spent on the illness could be put to more use or to pay a loan. So they ignore the fact that they are sick and continue to live as such. So they will not be able do their regular chores and stay sick for a longer period of time. For example, If someone having a fever he will not visit a doctor to check himself. He will suffer from the illness for more than a week and also have a chance of spreading the fever to his family members as well. So in conclusion if these smaller illness could be treated freely , most people will benefit from this free medical treatments.
The free medicare with limited access is quite a controversial area to discuss . This essay discussed the safer options of having medical insurance and also how the free medicare will benefit the common mass. To summarize tough the free medicare with limited access is not useful for severe illnesses it should be in place for the poor for a better medical care.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62656641604 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41417109454 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488721804511 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2493805242 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.3 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.95 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172318833649 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606330389891 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278849603975 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115316075054 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171541217875 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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