Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive.To what extent do you agree or disagree ?Give reasons for your answer and includ

The biggest asset any individual can possess is his or her health. Even a country is known to progress if the percentage of healthy population in that country is high. I strongly agree with the statement that there should be basic free health services provided by countries even if it does not cover all the medical procedures.

To begin with, every individual deserves a basic free health check-up on an annual basis as it help them become more aware of their own bodies and thus, keep them in check of their health and overall well-being. For instance, in India, government started an initiative of providing free medication to curb polio and eventually, the initiative have succeeded and India is now free of polio completely. Also, this health check-ups even help the economical under privileged people to at least get a basic health check-up which they generally can not afford.

However, science and medicine have advanced so profoundly over the years that providing every individual with all latest medical treatment can not be possible financially as treatments and medicines are too expensive. But, every individual does not require all the treatments. So only those need can pay extra bucks and get themselves treated for specific disease. Moreover, a routine free health check-up helps detect a problem in its early stage which can be cured easily instead of getting to know a health ailment at its final stage and spending unexpectedly huge amount to get it treated.

To sum up, I strongly believe that free medical check-up should be provided by every country to its citizens even if it does not include the high-end, sophisticated treatments.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, at least, for instance, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0802919708 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70686814782 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580291970803 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1519963965 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.545454545 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237528570066 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928552992304 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621460939756 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156833386619 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298420230731 0.056905535591 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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