Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
There are thousands of languages spoken all over the world. Each language has its unique importance and the history attached. Isn't it a negative development for the community to forget it? Wouldn't a common language be the best way of communication? This essay discusses the drawbacks behind the language being oblivion and the merits for the community as a whole about the generalization in language.
Vernacular language is the most essential part of any community in which the history of the province and religion is written. Also, it reminds us of our direct ancestors. In most of the cases, history and religious facts description would be available in the mother tongue only. For example, the stories about Ramayana and Mahabharata were originally written in Sanskrit language only. Therefore, forgetting the mother tongue is equivalent to erasing all the memories. No one would be able to know about once it becomes oblivion for the community.
On the other hand, generalization in the language can have plenty of positive impacts. Accepting the same language would dramatically change the way of communication. Also, it would be convenient for everyone to communicate with any person in any part of the world. For example, a person from Asia would be able to talk with the other with Russia even without knowing regional languages. In addition, children would not require to learn foreign languages which might feel confusing and burdensome task. They can even learn a common language with more accuracy.
In conclusion, I think languages are the emblem for their culture and forgetting them seems like the removal of the culture from the history of the world which is certainly not good for the whole community. However, accepting one language all over the world also has certain professional benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, may, so, therefore, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19727891156 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84247123846 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520408163265 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7669629479 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4210526316 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4736842105 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36842105263 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188266374574 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637711125176 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394950641876 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124575583657 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489929843604 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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