Excessive consumption of sugar causes many health-related issues. Some people believe that the government should control the population's sugar intake. While others think people themselves should be responsible for the sugar eating habit. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
It is true to say that sugar-based products are having deleterious effects on a healthy individual. Many individuals believe that it is the responsibility of the government to inhibit the consumption of sugar among people. Whereas, others consider that it depends on the individual's eating pattern. This essay will discuss both views and lead toward a reasonable conclusion.
On the one hand, to minimise the consumption of sugary products the government is running multiple awareness camps. The main goal of these programmes is to introduce the harmful effects of a high intake of sugar on a person's health. For example, the majority of the masses are suffering from obesity and diabetes, and the prime reason for these diseases is a high sugar diet. Hence, officials are providing knowledge to every age group through their educational programs.
On the other hand, some people argue by saying that it is not only the government's duty to curb the sugar intake in food, but it is solely dependent on the person. To be clear, if after knowing all the negatives of sugar products the individual still consumes a sugar-rich diet then there is no solution to the rising concern. So, a person should understand what is good and bad for their health only then it would be possible to reduce the consequence of sugary food on a healthy human body. According to a recent survey, 80% of adults have chosen a sugar-free diet and have observed significant improvement in their pre-existing medical condition and felt healthier.
To conclude, in my opinion, the government is not playing a major role in limiting sugar consumption. Only the person is responsible for his dietary habits, and the consumption of sugar-based product intake is decreased when it is willingly left by people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, still, then, whereas, for example, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05762711864 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89416097823 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572881355932 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2059129232 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.571428571 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346379365253 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109409919665 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652904413818 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201304510011 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394316959828 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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