Film stars and music celebrities may earn a great deal of money and live in luxurious surroundings, but many of them lead unhappy lives.
Do you agree? To what extent is this the price they pay for being famous?
It is known for fact that the lives of famous celebrities is full of glamour, success and huge money. Although, many of the renowned movie actors actually lead not a happy live. In this essay why the lives of media stars is not as good as we imagined it to be and the side effect of being famous.
To begin with, celebrities do not tend to have too many friends within the industry they are working, this is primarily due to competition among peers. There are acquaintances but there is no much depth in relationship as there is less emotional connection because of fierce nature of market. Secondly, the glamorous and polished life shown by the media, magazines does not show the emptiness and vacancy an individual feel after becoming rich and successful. Musicians and rock stars do not have much of personal freedom as their are in contract with record labels. For example, if Drake a global rapper would want to perform outside the country or in a concert he needs to have that stipulated in the business contract between him and company. Any kind of violation will have a law suit against him because they cannot take decisions on own as they are legally obliged.
Another drawback of being a music performer or movie actor is that you have to stay away from your home because of nature of their work. For instance, rock bands have their concerts and tours around the world where they perform, they have to stay at hotel or any accommdation provided to them which lacks comforts of own home when you are travelling for long period. Secondly, life of celebrities in under the eye of media, there is no privacy when cameramen follow you wherever you go, this defenteily have a detrimental effect of one's peace of mind.
In conclusion it not easy to live the life of a celebrity. Although, there is fame and money but one has to sacrifice lot of their personal freedom, choices and happiness for such status.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ull of glamour, success and huge money. Although, many of the renowned movie actors actu...
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...do not have much of personal freedom as their are in contract with record labels. For...
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...pany. Any kind of violation will have a law suit against him because they cannot take de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50480868185 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575221238938 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3352498268 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220710161869 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074083967215 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522711920421 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137011936215 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717842088106 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.