It is undeniable that, there has been escalating demand emerging for pure drinking water since past two to three decades. These days, scarcity of fresh water has become a global issue; there are innumerous causes behind water shortage. However, a few productive measures can reduce this plight to a large scale. Both the aspects are discussed further.
Discussing the reasons, the most common is population explosion is the factor of utmost importance, which has to lead the global surge in potable water requirement. To illustrate this, according to the world population data in 1975 the total number dwellers around the globe was 4.0 billion, which is now 7.6 billion bourgeois. Another reason is, a growing industrialization acquires an immense amount of water for manufacturing the various products. Factories in the USA are using 50 percent of total pure aqua, which has detrimental influences on society. Furthermore, these days, the growing use of salt-free water for activities such as recreational swimming, have also catalyzed the surge in global water demand.
To tackle these mentioned causes, some remedies can be suggested. The most effective step is that water recycling could play an essential role in water conservation. For this, Governments should build new water pipes system for recycling and should encourage people to use recycled water. Another solution is to remove salts from seawater to make it drinkable aqua. To represent this, Israel has developed filtration machine, which has the capacity to convert savoury water to pure drinkable. Besides this, each individual should not exploit the natural reserve water as the global demand has been dramatically increased.
To sum up, it can be said that, water demand is a global hurdle caused mainly by the growth of population as well as overexploitation for the various process. Although, in order to minimize its plight each individual and government should take a necessary step as the aqua is the basic requirement for all living beings. (Words: 323)
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, so, well, as to, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30959752322 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8410427201 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603715170279 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1215623071 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.882352941 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234122188801 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671438749738 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053255370777 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14718994452 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299155626819 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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