As global trade increases between different countries, many daily necessities are produced in other countries. Such goods are usually transported a long distance. Do the benefits of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?
The globalization has made it possible to get any product in any part of the world. As this export import is rising between nations, most of the everyday need products are manufactured in another country which has to travel a lot to reach till customer. In my opinion, the globalization of products has made life easy for many of the individuals and helped a people lot to fulfil their needs. In this essay, the reasons for globalization as profitable will be discussed in the following paragraphs in detail.
Firstly, the quality of a product is the prime demand for most of the customer, on behalf of that they are ready to pay extra for the same products. Various organization work on the way to get the pure quality of products for the customer. For example, the best quality of potatoes are produced in Pakistan and distributed all over the world, all thought the price is always little high as compared to other potatoes. Which is overall favoured by people around the world to get these potatoes.
Secondly, a chance of local product in a foreign land to keep the original taste for the consumer. Such as the availability of Indian spices in western countries to keep the original taste of Indian food in the western or Arabic world. To attain these facilities, a distribution centre may have to transport the product for a long distance which ultimately raises the cost of the item.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that the worldwide availability of products has made life easy for people, moreover, the quality has maintained. Which overall has benefited individuals of the different population to taste the products from different resources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90425531915 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80768891554 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514184397163 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4275724117 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.384615385 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0801996038417 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304881509528 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284696564072 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0511246555599 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230361989894 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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