It is often argued that the government should finance public services instead of investment in art. Although satisfy society's needs is more important than spending budget on art, but I think proper funding on art also could be crucial.
On the one hand, the government should make sure that all people can use educational, medical and transportation facilities equally, without regard to their possessions. As a matter of fact, public services that also consist of job opportunities play a very crucial role in our lives, Because when people do not have a job to get money to provide even a shelter for themselves, surely art doesn't have any place in their lives. For example in Kine in West Africa,
people 's income is not enough and they just can meet their fundamental needs so they do not take participate in art movements such as theaters or concerts.
On the other hand, Art has an essential position in society, it could be free of language, and could communicate between nations and transfer purpose without any word. For instance, some artists created an animation which invites societies to peace. This animation became very famous among people all over the world and lots of other artists follow their work. Some teachers also use art exercises in their educational systems and site that it helps students to learn better. For example, they suggested music to everyone who wants to learn a new language. So art is now an important part of our lives.
To sum up, absolutely public services are more vital than art, but it does not mean that investing in art is a waste of money, it could be valuable in many aspects of our life especially these days.
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Suggestion: to better; to well
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, for instance, i think, such as, as a matter of fact, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80139372822 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57857613091 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602787456446 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0126901826 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.833333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145377569961 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585926803314 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903378980933 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906203152268 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648126101826 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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