Grandparents play a big role in bringing up the children. Do you think it is useful for grandparents? Discuss reasons with your opinion and give relevant examples.

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Grandparents play a big role in bringing up the children. Do you think it is useful for grandparents? Discuss reasons with your opinion and give relevant examples.

Nowadays in many families, kids are raised by their grandparents. Grandparents are becoming necessary and important in family structure. They help young couples in daily life and make the family life much easier. This is actually a win-win-win situation either for elders, youngsters or kids.

Firstly, most of elders says that luckily that they have their first grandson or granddaughter in the first or second year of retirement, because they feel isolated or unneeded all of the sudden after leaving from working environment. Even some of them lose the meaning of life and feel useless before raising the new born baby, who has brought so much joy and hope to them. Their time is filled with babysitting and nursing leaving them no time to be upset.

Secondly, it there are no grandparents to take care of the kids, young parents have to hire a Nanny or one of them have to quit the job. This will bring huge burden for young family especially those who have bank loans.Young couple may feel much more stressed failing to focus on job promotions and career development. To some extent, grandparents are the best back-up for a young family.

Thirdly, it is most beneficial for young kids who are raised by grandparents. They can get the love and full attention from elders. It is much easier to feel the coziness and warmth of big family. It is believed that kids raised by grandparents are more likely to know about respecting and thanksgiving.

In China, most of kids are raised by grandparents. I firmly believe this gap generation relationship are the most precious emotion ties among people. I myself was raised by my grandparents before I was eight. Until now when i am at my 30's, I still remember the good old memories of how my grandparents have influence on me. That is the closest relationship except my parents.

In conclusion, It is granted for grandparents, parents and kids if them live together.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the elders') or simply say ''most elders''.
Suggestion: most of the elders; most elders
...ders, youngsters or kids. Firstly, most of elders says that luckily that they have their ...
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Message: This phrase is nonstandard. Did you mean 'all of a sudden'?
Suggestion: all of a sudden
... because they feel isolated or unneeded all of the sudden after leaving from working environment....
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...me to be upset. Secondly, it there are no grandparents to take care of the kid...
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Suggestion: Young
...ly especially those who have bank loans.Young couple may feel much more stressed fail...
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.... It is much easier to feel the coziness and warmth of big family. It is believed...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the kids') or simply say ''most kids''.
Suggestion: most of the kids; most kids
...ecting and thanksgiving. In China, most of kids are raised by grandparents. I firmly be...
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...ents before I was eight. Until now when i am at my 30s, I still remember the good...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, even so, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90853658537 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80408260195 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557926829268 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.9494287233 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10834039106 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358085528339 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409838845956 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0560646888286 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301702804427 0.056905535591 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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