Nowadays the increased amount of garbage(waste)is a real concern. why is this happening? What can be done to resolve this?

Essay topics:

Nowadays the increased amount of garbage(waste)is a real concern. why is this happening? What can be done to resolve this?

Nowadays, people are living at a fast pace, eating fast-food, using one-time products and buying whatever they can afford without giving a second thought. This results in huge amount of packaging rubbish. The earth is suffering from overloaded population and high amount of rubbish. Most of the rubbish is plastic stuff which can not be decomposed.

This happens for reasons. Firstly, with the development of people's living standard, people can afford to consume on different kind of products, most of which are more than needed. And the unneeded products then turn into garbage after people throw away. Secondly, the boost of fast-food industry and logistic industry is another reason of increasing wastes. people prefer take away food than cooking at home or dine in restaurant. This results in millions of tons of plastic bags and boxes per year. Last but not the least, manufactories and producers are to blame by over decorating and packaging in order to increase the sales.

There is a lot to do to prevent the situation. As to government, it is quite necessary to establish regulations of packages and wastes controlling. It is also essential to advertise so that to awake peoples awareness of environment protection by reducing garbages. Waste management and classification should be implemented all over the cities. As to personnel and families, we should be aware the seriousness of environment protection by using recyclable bags instead of plastic bags. It is time to take actions to protect our earth from garbage pollution.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, as to, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21686746988 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86854962628 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618473895582 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9579392466 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4117647059 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6470588235 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177854610821 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579419328424 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582058679747 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110715832033 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024755129511 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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