Some people say that it is individual responsibility to protect the environment while others say it is the government s primary role Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Some people say that it is individual responsibility to protect the environment while others say it is the government`s primary role. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

As the increasing problems of environment protection, some people believe that it is individual`s responsibility to protect our environment while others argue that it is the government who should play the role. I personally believe that both of them play a significant role on the environment issue.

On the one hand, people believe that environment pollution can be reduced rapidly by advocating citizens to do things on the daily basis. For example, by reducing the usage of one-time plastic bag or box can alleviate the pollution. Secondly, individuals can help to reduce the air pollution through using public transportation service more often to commute between home and office. What is more, treating waste properly and leading eco-friendly lifestyle is beneficial overall.
On the other hand, others think that government play the role primarily for reducing pollution. It is the government`s responsibility to establish laws and regulations to fine those who pollute the environment. Besides, government may improve public transportation service and run campaigns to encourage people to avoid driving cars. Thirdly, government can set up funds to help scientists to invent environmental friendly cars and necessities so that to improve the living conditions and our living planets significantly and thoroughly.

In conclusion, I believe that it needs the collaboration of the government and individuals to protect our environment from severe pollution. Both of them are responsible for this issue. Only when both of the government and citizens meet their environment responsibilities, would we live in a better world.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for example, in conclusion, what is more, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63306451613 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41853449913 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572580645161 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6344786728 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.461538462 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251264335884 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921997948261 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865753514873 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171398887728 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102644856104 0.056905535591 180% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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