Nowadays a lot of people are facing the problem of being obese and this is causing difficulty with the health care system as obesity results in many health related problems. Many people argue that it is best for new generation to have extra classes that focuses on physical training at school. I completely agree, extra curricular activity including physical education can help manage the problem with obesity, by spreading the knowledge to healthy eating and staying fit by doing physical activities.
Staying healthy is extremely important, so that one can perform well in studies, work and personal life. However, the lifestyle of todays generation is quiet sedentary, which is the main reason for weight gain in individuals. As the technology has advanced, people greatly rely on machines to perform their daily chores and as a result people are becoming less active physically. Also, the food habits especially the fast food, have a major role on weight gain particularly in children. Due to high content of fat and preservative in these food it results in abnormal weight gain and this has direct effect on overall health of an individual. This has linked to lot of health related problems including diabetes, blood cholesterol and other heart related issues. For instance, a research conducted by Oxford university, stated that people eating fast food are more likely to suffer from a heart attack that those eating healthy food.
Managing weight by including physical exercise in a routine can be of a great help. This could be started by making physical education available to children as a part of their curriculum at school. By doing this, children will stay active at school and at home as well. Also, parents can be benefitted by playing games or doing exercise with their child at home. Apart from that, young people should be provided with the knowledge of eating healthy. All such activities and enough knowledge can help fight all health related problems.
In conclusion, educating children to do physical training on regular basis and making them understand the importance of healthy food can surely help to overcome the situation of obesity and health related issues at a tender age. Such initiatives can also help adults to learn from their young ones and start living a healthy life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much health', 'a good deal of health'.
Suggestion: much health; a good deal of health
...ealth care system as obesity results in many health related problems. Many people argue tha...
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Line 3, column 535, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
...high content of fat and preservative in these food it results in abnormal weight gain and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09473684211 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58982132882 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3793203278 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.555555556 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203982568733 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652044659027 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591496059431 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135324513698 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752006377603 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.