A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Although such topics likely will never yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on misuse of animal species by human beings and killing them for selfish needs can lead to thought-provoking discussions. My view is that, irrespective of the number of arguments that exists, both the aspect must be taken into account. Through the course of this essay, I would like to put forth all the points and calculations to support my viewpoint by considering both the sides of the argument.
To begin with, animals are brutally killed and misused for monetary benefits. For instance, they are trained and used in Circus, Parks, and Zoo. Human beings are more advanced today, so they use varied techniques to conquer different wild species. Moreover, many research studies have already proved that animals do have strong feelings. It is very difficult for an animal to stay away from their beloved ones in Jungles and amuse people in cities. It might have shattered the emotions of myriad of animals, but it might have gone unnoticed by humans.
However, some people also argue that, animals do not have sense of responsibilities, morality and nor do they have understanding of their duties towards the other living beings. Hence, they are reluctant to relate animals with giving them rights like us, humans. Also, to maintain the food cycle, animals should be used as food. Otherwise, they the balance between all the species in the food cycle can be lost.
I see that there is equally potential evidence to support the arguments I have provided. I am inclined to believe that, for a greater ecological cause some animals must have same rights as us, but few of them can be used to suffice our needs. This will help us become better humans and we can also keep up with our staple needs that are dependent on them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90938511327 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60959845275 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608414239482 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3468559869 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8125 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362650039447 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107763117969 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684174714603 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205230932436 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928252090415 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.