The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.
Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, shopping using the online stores has increased. This in turn might cause a decline in the number of actual shops in towns and cities, and eventually lead them to close. From my perspective, I completely disagree with this idea for a number of reasons.
First of all, when it comes to buying clothes as an example, choosing the proper size is usually problematic. As different brands sometimes have different actual fitting size, nevertheless having the same size number. For instance, I used to wear a medium sized t-shirts from Nike, and when I wanted to buy a QuickSilver t-shirt, the small size fitted me perfectly. Moreover, the colours are always different on a computer screen than on reality, and not to mention the need to feel the clothes material to properly know its fabric.
Another reason clearly appears when it comes to buying perfumes. As a one can not smell the perfume and tell whether it is up to his/her taste or not by simply reading its components on a website. Furthermore, online stores tend to deceive customers by showing their products from a perfect view, and use photo-shopped pictures to grasp the attention; however, the actual product will never look the same.
In conclusion, although online shopping has increased, however it will never replace the actual shopping from real shops in cities and towns. As a result, shops will always remain opened for customers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02118644068 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66671566734 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2633376007 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.75 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22206362551 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808255912351 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900219481963 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150379142206 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109190764377 0.056905535591 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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