Having no money makes people unhappy. others are not happy having a lot of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Nowadays, most of the people are considering fortune to be the most important thing in this world. While some think that even it you are wealthy enough you cannot buy everything.
To start with, citizens think that without money they cannot support their needs. Especially when it comes to the basic commodities like food, clothing, and shelter, there are also some instances that there are experiencing. Like inflation rate is one of the problems which has a negative effect on the spending of their cash. That is why the populace are infuriated when they do not have adequate finances to support their growing needs.
However, there are some who considers having a lot of funds cannot buy everything. I think the society is trying their best to become rational when it comes to this notion because you cannot simply buy happiness. Which is why some of the public are not giving in to considering that wealth is the worst noteworthy thing here on earth. Also they are being pragmatic enough that you can achieve joy even if you are not financially capable.
In Conclusion, I believe that the people needs money to achieve their dreams, but they need also to balance their perception. That money cannot and will not buy buy true joyfulness that a person is craving for.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...needs money to achieve their dreams, but they need also to balance their percepti...
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...ception. That money cannot and will not buy buy true joyfulness that a person is cravin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, i think, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8401826484 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46520372699 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534246575342 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.3565441293 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.3333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100947069364 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394424864766 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394378296216 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0628692812052 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305279721506 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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