Health is the responsibility of the individual as well as the government
Health is an asset that must be taken care of. Just the way a business cannot produce revenues without having assets that can generate return on investment, a person cannot benefit himself and his society without having a good health. But whose responsibility is it to ensure that an individual remains in good health? Some people say that the responsibility lies with individuals themselves while others claim that it is the responsibility of their governments to ensure that people enjoy a healthy life. In this essay we will discuss how both of these views are not necessarily incorrect and how individuals and their governments are both equally responsible for maintaining a healthy population.
Good health starts with self-care. Yes, it is that simple, as far as simple weather related or personal hygiene related diseases are concerned. A person is responsible for taking a balanced diet and avoiding foods that can put him on the potential risk of getting sick. For Example, many illnesses that take their toll on individuals during winters can be avoided by taking adequate vitamin C, wrapping up warmly and avoiding cold beverages. Also, we know that many diseases surface when the immune system of a person weakens. Many causes of a weakened immune system can be controlled by simply indulging in a routine of self-care e.g. taking adequate sleep, avoiding unnecessary stress and not binging on fast food.
But that doesn’t free governments of their responsibility. What happens when a person, even after doing all he can, gets sick? What about the time when genetics take their toll? Surely, then the role of government comes into play. A government is responsible for making sure that people get health care at minimal cost and that everyone has access to health care service. As far as the availability of medical care in far flung areas is concerned, it is totally government’s job to ensure that all rural areas have necessary health care units.
People and their governments are not independent of each other. No matter what the job is, both have to work side by side. In this essay we discussed how a person has to take care of his own health and how the government is responsible for providing an overall health care system to ensure that everyone lives a healthy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
... that everyone lives a healthy life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, e.g., if, so, then, while, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1929.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01038961039 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80421339254 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524675324675 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8486193551 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.45 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299132720065 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957660852702 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927464151503 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20126282348 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0937170833334 0.056905535591 165% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.