Some people think that public health is the responsibility of the government while others think that people should be responsible for their own health. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
There is an opinion that authorities are on duty to take care of citizens’ health nationwide. However, there are people who believe that it is a matter of personal liability. In this essay, I will consider both sides of the argument and then give my own opinion on the matter.
From the one side are those who support the idea that the government’s policies on public health are more important than the personal responsibility of the individuals. They would probably claim that some health issues, especially pandemic situations could not be solved by the efforts of one person and there is a place when governments should step up. For example, infectious diseases like cholera needed to be combated through collective measures, usually undertaken by the state, such as the construction of sewers and the provision of clean water.
However, opponents of the notion mentioned above argue that society should not deny the fact that behaviour of individuals in terms of their own health and hygiene plays a significant role in public health. This is because many diseases, especially chronic ones are associated with the habits of a particular person. For instance, smoking is related to lung cancer and cardiovascular disease. Thus, every citizen has to be in charge of his own physical state and take measures helping them to maintain it such as following a healthy lifestyle including a nutrients enriched diet and physical activity.
In conclusion, both sides of the argument have their merits. On balance, however, I consider that the government should be in charge of the effective functioning of the healthcare system and provide decent medical service for all social groups. Meanwhile, taking crucial and vital decisions related to the personal health of a citizen is the ultimate responsibility of every individual himself.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 555, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a nutrient' or simply 'nutrients'?
Suggestion: a nutrient; nutrients
...following a healthy lifestyle including a nutrients enriched diet and physical activity. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23310810811 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89266336956 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.507649485 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.153846154 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312474538624 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937000551905 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533501863941 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176329327153 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256591435632 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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