Homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world. What do you think are the main causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?
In this day and age, more and more people are becoming homeless in some major cities. This trend is mainly due to the rise of the house and the instability in the national economy. However, there are a number of measures that can be implemented to resolve this problem.
To begin with, there are many reasons which result in the rise in the number of homeless people. The main reason is that some people cannot afford their own accommodation as house prices have soared beyond their means and they have fewer options in choosing a place to live, which is easy for them to be destitute. According to a recent study, more and more houses are considered unaffordable. Moreover, with the situation of the world in this day and age, some countries in the world struggle with economic matters, so it is easy for them to not only become unemployed but also find it easier to live in the street. For instance, some elderly individuals in Taiwan are living in the station because of the dive in the economy there.
However, there are many solutions which can be used to tackle this problem. First of all, some governments need to have some programs for low-income people and the unemployed to possess a free or affordable house because of . For instance, there is a program for some poor people in Ha Noi to buy cheap houses. In addition, some countries need to have some programs for helping low-income employee increase their income, which means that they can live in a safer place than the previous place. Take Alberta program for example. It is one of the most popular program in Canada to create jobs for some unemployment at there.
In conclusion, the unaffordable price of houses and the rise of unemployment are the main reason for homelessness. Only when having some affordable houses and creating some job opportunities for poor people, will this situation be remedied.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
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Message: The proper name in singular (Alberta) must be used with a third-person verb: 'programs'.
Suggestion: programs
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76923076923 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59083175808 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476923076923 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6933181001 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.875 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108013733968 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481890891788 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527394548903 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900752764557 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583215639224 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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